Blog 8

My two biggest issues were my thesis was a little weak and grammar. My thesis was not strong enough and I need to make it more clear for the reader to understand. I would fix this problem by adding more information. The grammar issues i had were mostly periods and capitalization. I will fix this problem by reading my paper again. I need to finish my paper by adding half of a page to make it complete.

Blog 8

Topic blog6

Middle East crisis will be a good topic that i can talk about with others because it is crisis that is taking place at this moment. Since the middle crisis started, longtime dictators were overthrown with in a mater of weeks which was UNusual because the whole world was so surprise with what happen in Egypt because, a dictator that ruled Egypt over thirty years was overthrown with in days. So, what is happening in the middle east is a good topic to talk about with others. So, i believe this topic will be easy since almost everyone knows about or heard about what is happening in the Middle East.

Quotation & Orphans

quotation is if you say anything someone say before you exactly that is quotation means.orphans is someone doesn't have mom and dad, so the connect between these words are if taken some his/her witting and you didn't but anything shows others quotation mark that is like doesn't have mom and dad too.

Many company has different custom, like Domino's Pizza Inc. has a delivery man, so Britain, customers don't like the idea to someone knocking their doors they think that is bad, so i say that isn't bad. In Japan,houses doesn't have address number, nobody can founding their apartment, so i say they need to get anatomy their houses. In ice land where much of the population doesn't have phone service if the Domino's trying to drive they can't founding. The most favorite snacks in America made my Britain is Chocolate chip cookie.

writting the conversation

I looked up the Webster's American English Dictionary it's says conversation is having knowledge and experience. Conversation writing I'm very shying person if i want to say something i always be afraid to say it that, And myself talk to me back and says to me that is wrong pronounce so i like to write down and evrybody understand me clearly.

hello

I just recently bought a laptop from walmart because i needed a laptop that i has allot data planes. This loptop will help me do my homework because it has the latest windows which makes everything faster. my dad convinced me to get this laptop because he understood how much how i needed this new laptop so that i can accomplish my goals.